Free scriptwriting tips every Friday: Learn my scriptwriting system: Work With Me: Want to write better YouTube hooks that grab attention fast? In this video, you’ll learn a proven method to shorten your YouTube intro without cutting important information — so you can hook viewers in seconds and boost audience retention. Discover how to spot and remove fluff, keep only the critical hook content, and restructure extra details for stronger intros and longer watch time. ------------------------------------ EXTRA RESOURCES 💡 Easy-to-use AI tools for YouTubers: FREE Audience Avatar course: FREE templates: LET'S CONNECT 🤝 Instagram: LinkedIn: Twitter/X: Podcast: TECH & TOOLS 🎙️ Get the exact tools I use to run my 6-figure YouTube scriptwriting business: ------------------------------------ 0:00 – The Problem 0:20 – Critical vs. beneficial information 1:14 – Mistake #1 2:12 – Mistake #2 3:07 – Mistake #3 4:05 – Where to move the stuff you cut