Free Course: Million View Blueprint - Get Day 1 now → Work With Me (Click Lab) → George Blackman is a scriptwriter who has written videos for Mike Shake, Film Booth, Noah Kagan, Ali Abdaal, and Creator Wizard. In this video, we talk about: 1. What Makes For A Strong Hook 2. Mistakes That Are Killing Your Retention 3. Understand Your Retention Graphs 4. Three Tips To Improve Your Scripts and so much more... TIME STAMPS - 00:00 - Intro 00:22 - What Makes for a Strong Hook? 04:47 - What Common Mistakes do you see creators make? 06:09 - What is the first step to a good script? 07:21 - What are some common retention killers? 10:24 - How To Identify Strong Payoffs? 14:11 - How Can We Identify What Our Audience Wants? 16:21 - How To Understand Retention Graphs 19:34 - How Can YouTubers Think About Scripts Differently? 22:14 - Should We Use A Teleprompter? 27:04 - Why Is Storytelling So Important On YouTube? 29:12 - How To Create Stronger Call To Actions? 31:40 - Top Three Tips To Improve YouTube Scripts